In terms of the technical stuff, like grammar, and writing style, I would hope that my prose has improved! Very rarely do I go into papers confident, and even more rarely do I leave them confident. I would also agree that it has helped my writing throughout all of my classes, from history, to seminar, even to music business. I have worked on things like wordiness, word choice, and the use of the passive voice--clearly not in this reflection, but in my other work. The papers we have written were fairly cool in that they were all similar, all related. I used aspects of my first couple of papers in my last expository paper, which I feel has made it that much better.
On the description of the Nature Log that was handed to us on the second day of class, it says one reflection on a southern landscape. I don't guess that this is a reflection on a southern landscape so without further ado:
As I was walking through the farmland on Thanksgiving, I saw the landscape. and the vast amount of empty space before me. There was a small red barn, with three horses roaming around outside, and some chickens running--probably glad they weren't turkeys. Far past the flatland, I can see the small outline of a line of trees. They look thick, but without knowing, I would probably think that they would end, and more farmland would begin. I know better, though. I know that there is a large wooded are through those trees, easy to get lost in. It might even be called a forest. Since it was abnormally hot on Thanksgiving, the trees were still green, and the ground still lush. Not many leaves had fallen making it seem thicker than when I normally see it--Thanksgiving, or Christmas. Just outside the city of Nashville, is desolate farmland coupled with rich woods. Interesting, I though.
I continued to look around, and there were dogs barking, and cats roaming around (the owner of the house is a veterinarian to explain all of the animals.) It's hard in Nashville to get a landscape without many houses, so if I were to look left or right I saw a few rows of houses, but I kept my head forward and drank in the beauty of the land before me. As the sun beat down on me on Thanksgiving, I had to take my jacket off--a very bizarre thing for the end of November. I continued to look at the fields and the trees in the distance, but all to soon the sun began to set, and I couldn't see anything anymore. I looked up and saw the cloudless sky, and the beautiful stars--stars are something that I find more fascinating, and more beautiful than anything else in this world. Qiuckly, after the dark came, I voice yelled from inside, that if I wanted pie I should come fast. I chose the pie.
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